Feature Story Peer Response


  1. Who is the audience and what is the purpose for this piece of writing? Consider offering a suggestion if either the audience or purpose is not clearly established.

A question about knowing not what do with our life's.
  1. What do you see as the writer’s main point in these questions?
How did you get to the place where you started your business 
  1. Which part of these questions interests you the most? Why?

how did you start your own business? Because I don't know what type of business it is 
  1. Where do you feel you would like more detail or explanation on any questions? Where do you need less?
No, the questions are fine. 
  1. Do you find any questions unclear, confusing, or undeveloped? 
No 


  1. Who is the audience and what is the purpose for this piece of writing? Consider offering a suggestion if either the audience or purpose is not clearly established.

Background feature & Personality 
  1. What do you see as the writer’s main point in these questions?
The main point is about the interviewees childhood life. 
  1. Which part of these questions interests you the most? Why?
The part that interests me the most is that she grew up in a different country because I haven't experienced that. 
  1. Where do you feel you would like more detail or explanation on any questions? Where do you need less?
More detail would be about the challenges.
  1. Do you find any questions unclear, confusing, or undeveloped? 
No


  1. Who is the audience and what is the purpose for this piece of writing? Consider offering a suggestion if either the audience or purpose is not clearly established.
None
  1. What do you see as the writer’s main point in these questions?
The main point is getting the interviewees experiences of being an army brat
  1. Which part of these questions interests you the most? Why?
The part that interests me the most is where was your favorite place to live because they have a lot of experience with moving so that must have been kinda cool to live in many different places.  
  1. Where do you feel you would like more detail or explanation on any questions? Where do you need less?
More detail would be her school life. 
  1. Do you find any questions unclear, confusing, or undeveloped? 
No

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