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Final Exam Part 3

                                           Allowances  Many families give their children an allowance each week for many reasons. Allowances are very good for children in many ways, When they have a job and they are living on their own, they will be able to balance their spending and savings. Some parents give their children allowances regardless of their behavior because they believe that this teaches them about finance. While others, give them an allowance as a reward for completing chores and or good grades. In my opinion, I believe that children should only receive an allowance as a reward, not as a way to keep their children behaving. Children should behave on their own rather than needing to be paid for it. Kids should start getting allowances as soon as they start talking about and asking for money. This normally happens at a pretty young age so, you can ...

Final Exam Part 2

At 2 a.m. yesterday morning, meteorologists at the Nadi Weather Centre detected a cyclone developing rapidly near Nauru and moving quickly south-west across the Pacific towards the Solomon Islands. "It was a fast developing front that we could not have anticipated any faster." director James Jones said.  At 3 a.m., they contacted the Solomon Islands government, warning of the approach of Cyclone Victor. Government officials began to warn the police and all shipping.  "We warned all the proper authorities." Jones said.  By 10 a.m., winds in Honiara were blowing at more than 140 kilometers per hour. "The storm had sustained winds of 140 kph and was classified as a Level 4 Cyclone" Jones said.  At about midday, the centre of the cyclone passed directly over Honiara before tracking into the Coral  Sea, where it blew itself out. "It was pretty chaotic for a few hours there when the storm hit the community." chief Marianna Adams said.  In Honia...

Final Exam Extra Credit

Story #2 Last Saturday, 19 year old Timothy Milan died.  A guard at Panzer's Department Store told police he saw Milan stuff two sweaters down his pants legs, then walk past a checkout line and out of the department store. "We saw him start running and the guard was right behind him." eyewitness Sherry Carter said.  The guard then began to chase Milan, who ran, and three bystanders joined in the pursuit. They caught up with Milan, and, when he resisted, one of the bystanders applied a headlock to him. "We went outside to see what was going to happen and we saw the boy get dragged to the ground." Carter said.   A police officer who arrived at the scene reported that Milan collapsed as he put handcuffs on him. An autopsy conducted to determine the cause of death revealed that Milan died due to a lack of oxygen to the brain. "It was a case of excusable homicide." police spokesman Michael Williams said.  Police today said they do not plan to charge...

Final Exam Review

1. Timeliness  the fact or quality of being done or  occuring at a favorable or useful time why writing a news story recent 2. Proximity nearness in  space , time, or relationship  how close the story is to us  3. Human Interest the aspect of a story in the media that interests  people   because it describes the experiences or emotions of individuals  wether people find the story appealing  4. Prominence the state of being important  how important  5. Conflict the problem  two sides going  against   each other   6. Interviews a meeting of  people to ask and answer questions  getting info from a source 7. Research the  investigation in order to establish facts about a subject  prepare for interview 8. Quotations words said by  someone  else  statements  what you get from a source direct indirect  9. Yes-no qu...

Feature Story Peer Critique

1. Who were the sources? Dean Fuller, Dana Fuller  2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story: This story is about how Dean Fuller was hitchhiking when he met his wife.  3. How many paragraphs is the story? 20 4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)? 875 5. How many direct quotes are there in the story? 10 6. How many different people are quoted in the story? 2 7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included? “Certainly hitchhiking gave me a feeling of how independent and resourceful I was for sure", said Fuller. “On the flip side I also new I could have a great time wherever I was with money or not. I could go anywhere I want without money, but overall it gave me a feeling of confidence in life.” 8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)? end 9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention? yes 10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be? The ...

Feature Story Self Critique

1. Who were the sources? My source was Peggy Orange 2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story: The story is about how The Buzzy Orange Band was invited to represent the U.S in China.  3. How many paragraphs is the story? 22 4. How many words is the story? 866 5. How many direct quotes are there in the story? 11 6. How many different people are quoted in the story? 1 7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included? “I loved it so much. It was such an honoring feeling to have the opportunity and to be able to do the things we did. It couldn’t have been any better.” Orange said. 8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)? end 9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention? yes 10. If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be? My grandpa  11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer? Yes  12. Are there any un...

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CE Quiz #3.1

1.) Sean Foley and Andrew Nestor 2.) They are public lands for public use. 3.) The increases are needed to keep up with inflation, to offer competitive pay for faculty and staff members, and to address deferred maintenance of laboratories and classrooms. 4.)  Mayfield - lake travis, Lamar Jackson - Louisville, Bryce Love- Stanford  5.) The movies I would like to see are Daddy's home 2, Wonder, Justice league and Coco because they all seem entertaining.  LONG RESPONSE  1.) What could have been wrong or what is wrong is that fact that he tweeted about it in general. I think that our president should not be sharing things like that over social media.  2.) No, I do not think that trump knew. This is because he had fired him. 3.) No, I think that using twitter is completely dumb and unprofessional. He is the president of the U.S who tweets about his disputes that the people should hear from the news first.  4.) I think that twitter shoul...