Feature Story Peer Critique

1. Who were the sources?
Dean Fuller, Dana Fuller 
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
This story is about how Dean Fuller was hitchhiking when he met his wife. 
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
20
4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
875
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
10
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
2
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
“Certainly hitchhiking gave me a feeling of how independent and resourceful I was for sure", said Fuller. “On the flip side I also new I could have a great time wherever I was with money or not. I could go anywhere I want without money, but overall it gave me a feeling of confidence in life.”

8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
end
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
yes
10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
The friend Dean had hiked with 
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
yes
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
no
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
Hiking for Love 
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
I think that this story was well-written. 
15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100
98 

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