Personal Essays
1.) Opinion Essay
2.) Avoid using abstract expressions
3.) Use details, describe emotions, and make it a compelling essay
2.) Avoid using abstract expressions
3.) Use details, describe emotions, and make it a compelling essay
Earthquake Story
Who; McHenrys Auto shop supply, Mike Beamer, Penny Gertz, Jennifer Vu What; earthquake When; 8:12 am Monday morning Where;San Francisco Bay area Why; Hayward Hills How; Hayward Hills An earthquake rocked the San Francisco Bay area Monday morning. The quake struck at 8:12 a.m. PDT. People as far south as Los Angeles and as far north as Redding felt the quake, Gertz said. A building housing McHenry’s Auto Supply at 2342 Plum St. partially collapsed, killing two people and injuring six others, according to Jennifer Vu, a public information officer from the Hayward Fire Department. Names of the dead are being withheld pending notifications of families, Vu said. Hayward resident Mike Beamer, whose apartment is across the street from McHenry’s, said he felt a rolling motion that lasted for about 30 seconds, with a big jolt coming in the middle. “I was eating my breakfast when the room started rolling. I dove under the table just as I heard an explosion ou...
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