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Opinion Writing

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  1. UnknownNovember 3, 2017 at 11:49 AM

    I really liked your story and how your points were very clear and effective. I think that you should try to expand more on some of the paragraphs to make them better.

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  2. Delayna_F_blogNovember 3, 2017 at 11:51 AM

    I do agree with a lot of the points you make in your story. You could work a bit on your structure, because some of the important factors like stress should go more towards the top. I like how you used facts and researched your topic before you wrote you seemed very well informed on what you wrote. Your opinion seems very strong till the end when you talk about a different type of testing which makes it a bit wishy-washy, so maybe leave that out.

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  3. UnknownNovember 3, 2017 at 12:34 PM

    I think you did a great job on your story! I liked how you kept a strong stance on your topic and stuck with it throughout the story. You had really god facts to support your opinion, which made your stance more persuasive and convincing. If you were to change anything, I would recommend focusing on expanding your thoughts in each paragraph to add more depth and length. Other that that, your writing was great.

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